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Thank you so much for sharing.
I think you should break up the paragraphs with white space since we can't do 1.5 spaces lines. I think it would make it a bit more inviting.
You are a lovely story writer. Are you compulsive about going back, re-reading and changing things? I am. I am horrible about it!!